nderground
Oct 1, 2021

This article is in drastic need of a rewrite. I found it close to impenetrable. Why the mix of chemistry and software engineering? There was supposed to be some point there, but it eluded me.

I understand that writing in english, when it is not your native language, is a challenge. But you might want to get a friend to read your posts first.

The article starts out "remind all elements"... What does this mean? The elements are, in fact, in the correct order. What are you trying to say?

I've taken college level chemistry and I have no idea what you're trying to say here.

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